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Boomer Styles
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0 posted 2016-08-31 12:34 PM


I found a little box
I brought it to my home
I took it to my room
I opened the little box
I saw her there, in the corner of the box
I lifted her out on my finger
I saw that she had been crying
I wanted to ask her why
I was surprised to know that she was sad
I turned in circles to dry her tears
I then saw a smile evolve as we twirled about
I was happy to see that she had wings
I saw her begin to move them, first slow...then faster
I delighted in their fluttering and she rose from my finger
I saw her smile widen and my room became warmer
I saw her wave to me as she turned...and flew out my window
I started to feel sad
I felt I had lost a friend
I started to cry
I looked at the box, and it seemed bigger now
I climbed into the box and laid in the corner
I let the box close slowly over me
I hope someone will one day find me

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2016-08-31 08:22 AM


I liked this for sure. I think most of us have our own special box to lay in, hoping . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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2 posted 2016-08-31 11:04 AM


Well what goes around comes around. Interesting write!
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