i am no longer sure of anything

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Open Poetry #49

i am no longer sure of anything

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2016-08-27 08:30 AM

I am no longer sure of anything,
Neither of the poetry, nor the reality,
Nor human feelings,
Even love has moments so vague
Roads which we cannot know,
The desire is a bird who flies away
When we approach him too closely.
I am no more sure of anything,
exepted one,
the heat of the sun is made for me.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2016-08-27 09:03 AM

Loved your thoughts revealed within the lines of your poem, Yann, except the last line. In my opinion there should only be two seasons, fall and spring. One hundred degree weather is not my cup of tea. Neither is zero degrees in winter.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2016-08-27 10:07 AM

thanks Jerry for all the comment, wgen i write the poem in french the word chaleur (heat) was a friendly word, as you put it it is more agressive in English, I will seek for a more specific word maybe

yann

Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

3 posted 2016-08-27 12:01 PM

Nous ne sommes rien sans le soleil, et je ne sais rien d'autre. Bravo!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2016-08-31 05:28 AM

I can relate yann.

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