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Boomer Styles
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since 2014-03-02
Posts 194
South Side Of Success

0 posted 2016-08-26 10:10 PM


Boomer stretches as he wakes up...

Oh dawn,
you've brought me here again.

I asked you not to wake me
until I had finished my visit.

What's that...? Oh, I see.

You didn't want me to use
all my dreams at once.

In that case, I'll get up
and get this day started.

After all, the sooner
I get this day over with,

the sooner I can return
to my dreams.




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DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01
Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie
1 posted 2016-08-27 10:23 PM


Now that's some good poetry right there Boomer!

I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car.

Redstart
Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535

2 posted 2016-08-30 05:25 PM


I love this, and the way you tell dawn that you are the boss.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2016-08-30 10:47 PM


nice...james
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