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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2016-08-09 02:20 PM

locating my frolic
lost somewhere along the way
discarded among my happy-go-lucky
brazen swagger
teeth gritted for effect
dealing with the dust and dream
looking for my sizzle
it used to fit snug, like a
a patented soft leather glove
been told I look lustful
in my leathers
ahhh . . .
found my misplaced frolic
wear with pride
feels so good
I allow it to be unbuttoned
exposing my glad

©July 29, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2016-08-09 02:45 PM

I don't know jp..reminds me of a time when I was 16 and some guy pulled up..unbuttoned. I wasn't glad..

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2016-08-09 02:59 PM

Thank you Blues, but I said, "I allow it to be unbuttoned / exposing my glad." It had not one thing to do with sexually exposing oneself. Sorry you thought of a day of un-glad.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2016-08-09 04:36 PM

Sorry my bad..I'll get my mind out of the gutter..

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

4 posted 2016-08-09 09:50 PM

Metaphorically, I can see the 'shields' go down and an openness revealed. Some people you just feel more comfortable with.

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2016-08-09 09:58 PM

I try to be comfortable with as many people as I can, Ari. It works out pretty good for me. Thanks for stopping by, reading my poem, and commenting.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

6 posted 2016-08-13 03:52 PM

'unbuttoned' I love it!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2016-08-13 04:19 PM

Thanks, Redstart for showing up here.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2016-08-13 06:32 PM

I read this when you first posted but didn't reply because I related so well to the first part and was envious of the second. Really good poem! Should have said so to begin with.
~L

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2016-08-13 06:45 PM

Hey! Everything is cool, Lori. Sometimes I won't comment on a poem until later for whatever reason. Thanks for being here today.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

DaysofView
Member

since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

10 posted 2016-08-14 08:54 PM

Happy is where you find it Jerrypat! Imagine finding your frolic without your glad or happy! Very cheerful worth alot of smiles!

I want to die in my sleep like my grandfather...not like the passengers screaming in the back of his car.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

11 posted 2016-08-14 10:26 PM

Heh.Heh Thanks bunches for your cute response to my poem, DV. I love your thoughts very much.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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