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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2016-07-23 09:57 PM



The silence of the broken night,
A siren in the dark;
I lay here with eyes wide open,
Listening to a dog bark.

But somewhere in my beating heart,
Feels the presence to keep;
Old memories are shining through,
I smile and go to sleep.

©June 28, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

© Copyright 2016 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane
1 posted 2016-07-24 02:39 AM


It's generally quiet in this little hamlet of houses where I am. Sometimes, I too hear the faint wail of a distant siren and I think of those that once were intended for me and also as an afterthought, those in my younger years that tried to tempt me to an early demise...and I will smile over my own mortality.

Sleep well Jerry, you earned it...and keep smiling.  

Loving Linny Jean is poetry.

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2016-07-24 09:14 AM


Ahhh . . . Thank you very much, Ari, and keep loving Linny Jean . . .

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BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2016-07-27 05:41 PM


Awww JP,  the peace in this piece is spot on.  
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2016-07-27 06:51 PM


Thank you, Blues, I appreciate your kind words.

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Redstart
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5 posted 2016-07-31 05:35 PM


I'm with you, Jerry, but old memories keep me awake.
JerryPat2
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6 posted 2016-07-31 05:53 PM


Oh, mine does also, Redstart, if I forget to take my trazadone.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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