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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-07-10 07:54 AM



Oxford Memories.
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She escapes a gaggle of trouser peacocks
Paying court with mirror practiced charms
Crosses Cherwell’s honeyed bridge
A Venus to grace the slow days of summer
Careless hair made for wind blow
Cheeks fashioned for candlelight
Eyes born for helpless surrender
Embrace
I sheltered in her shadow.

[This message has been edited by Cari (07-11-2016 05:18 AM).]

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Constance
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1 posted 2016-07-10 07:26 PM


Some really lovely lines here, Cari. I enjoyed reading this one.

Smiles,
Cee

Redstart
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2 posted 2016-07-12 05:07 PM


Simply beautiful. Memories of youth haunt the psyche like the dreaming spires.
RedStoneEB
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3 posted 2016-08-08 04:21 PM


i enjoyed the read nice lines.

RS

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2016-08-09 02:57 PM


You are quite the wordsmith. This was captivating and a pure pleasure to read.
Cari
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Englnand
5 posted 2016-08-14 05:11 AM


Glad you enjoyed the poem, thank you for you’re kind comments There are some really lovely girls in Oxford and I shared one idyllic summer with one. Happy days.

Cari.

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