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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-07-04 05:32 AM




The Ring


In a doorway she waits
Never still, watching
Wary eyes, schooled by the careless fist
Grateful for the wraiths of London fog
Cold sanctuary on a November morn
~
She holds the bundle of new life
Close to milk dried breasts
Smiles through the tears
Croons to sleeping eyes
~
Lamplight soft through the railings
She hurries across the square
Lays the wicker basket close to the gate
And kneels in prayer
~
Two gifts, a ring and the promise of life
Nothing else to offer
She stumbles into the fog
Denying the agony of a backward look.
~
See now the little ring
Aged by centuries
Sniff your disapproval
through the luxury of judgement.


This poem was inspired by a visit to the museum on the site of the old Foundling Home in London for abandoned children set up as a charity in the 1700s. Where there is a long glass case containing the pitiful mementoes left by the mothers in the hope that they may one day return for their child, sadly very few did.


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2016-07-04 08:12 AM


I love that last line, Cari. Reality.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2016-07-05 10:10 PM


fine writing...james
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2016-07-06 07:56 AM


Wonderful poem. Background info was icing on the cake. ~L
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