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DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01
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Just A Slice Of The Pie

0 posted 2016-06-25 11:17 PM


touch awakes
naive distaste
his touch returned
in ill-timed haste
ending all which
once was chaste

a younger mans
sweet caress
touches me
with tenderness
my heart now his
he does possess

afraid to feel
my heart restrains
a rushed emotions
sweet refrain
my love pours out
like falling rain

If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time.

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2016-06-26 09:02 AM


If this is the real deal DV, I wish you all the love and happiness which is possible to have. Loved the poem in its simplicity and honesty. if this is a dream within you, I sincerely hope you find your young man.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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