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Fatality - Senryu
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Fatality - Senryu |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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the death of what was fix your mouth just right, say pfft what was is no more ©April 5, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
quote:...exemplifies passe', one of my most used words. I've gotten rid of far more than I kept, metaphorically or otherwise. Love the simple yet profound wisdom in your writing Jerry. More feelings and fewer words please |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Ari, your thoughts always give me a good feeling. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
Hi Jerrypat! Your "pfft" sounds like an abracadabra! I guess there's somethings "was" that I don't miss! Good poem! If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you DV, for reading and commenting on my poem. Thank you very much indeed. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Pfft! yep, that's a good way to think of it. I've got some pfft's I need to accept and some things I need to say pfft to. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Yeah, I hear you loud and clear, Lori. I finally, after so many years, learned to seek what was good for ME! The rest of the pfft's worked itself out. Thank for your kind comments. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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SlimMorrison New Member Posts 7 |
I love a good Haiku |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, Slim, so do I . . . Welcome to the Blue Room . . . ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
it is what it is.... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah, you're right, LeeJ. Thank you for being here. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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