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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-06-23 03:47 PM





Hazy mist of golden corn dust
Drifting in the August sunset
Creaking hay carts, patient horses,
Gentle strength and latent power
~
Cries and shrieks of sun brown children
Sent by thirsty, tired out parents
Hunting for the jar of cider
Cooling under the blackthorn hedge
~
Soulful Blackbird in the high elms
Sings a wistful hopeful love song
Trilling in the creeping twilight
Hanging on the scented air
~
The calling bells of St Peters
Lantern light and smoky fires
Welcome! Welcome! Happy toilers
Peace on earth
And harvest home
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A retreat to simpler times and simple ways, without the call of IPods and Cell Phones, but maybe life as it should be lived.

[This message has been edited by Cari (06-23-2016 05:44 PM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2016-06-23 05:25 PM


Takes me back to Summer when I was a kid and a very much simpler time...very much enjoyed! ~L
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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2 posted 2016-06-23 09:42 PM


Ahhh . . . Yes, yes, yes, I recall those sunburned days. Playing so hard that the world seemed to be a part of your own creation.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2016-06-23 09:53 PM


nice...james
DaysofView
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Just A Slice Of The Pie
4 posted 2016-06-25 11:13 PM


Its like looking at a lovely painting like Norman Rockwell or even a Carrier and Ives. You write such nice poems Cari.

If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time.

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