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DaysofView
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Just A Slice Of The Pie

0 posted 2016-06-22 02:33 AM


Scripts of the sages
Timeline tells of two lovers
From the Potters hands

If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time.

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2016-06-22 08:23 AM


Ahhh . . . What a delightful picture flashed through my thoughts as I read this senryu. Thank you for that.

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ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2016-06-26 10:27 PM


Inspiring little write
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2016-07-05 10:19 PM


enjoyed your writing...james
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