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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2016-06-22 01:16 AM


Pretty Eyes Never Meant to Cry

In the unwooded area
in the deep, deep woods
lived a very sweet woman
wanting a man that was good;
you might ask me
how I knew of her,
well many times I heard stories of her
from men that had ventured there,
and they always returned
with sad stories to share,
so being aware
that she was still available
with much sweetness to share,
I decided I would offer my friendship to her
to let her know how much I cared;
she was playing in the meadow
when I first arrived,
I took a look and barely believed my eyes,
she possessed a special beauty
and truly was a prize,
her inner and outer beauty were
truly beyond compare,
I politely introduced myself
and the conversation progressed from there,
both enjoying the others company
and the valuable times we would share.

JamesLee
6/22/16

  



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DaysofView
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Just A Slice Of The Pie
1 posted 2016-06-22 02:30 AM


So sweet! Really good poem James!

If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time.

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2016-06-23 09:50 PM


Thank you DaysofView, appreciate it...james
2islander2
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by the sea
3 posted 2016-06-25 08:51 AM


this woman seems to me very attractive and promising, fine penning james


yann



JerryPat2
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4 posted 2016-06-25 10:08 AM


Heh.Heh Gotta go where the "valuable times" are, James, in order to stand a chance with the one you seek out.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane
5 posted 2016-06-25 08:03 PM


Sex is filled with moans and groans and laced with many a lie. It's also easy to procure if you're a skilled 'Silver-Tongued Devil", or a "pay-as-you-go" kind of person.

But good conversation?

More feelings and fewer words please

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2016-06-27 09:59 PM


Thank you 2islander2, jerry and Ari for responding...Ari I never mentioned sex, this is more like that old Camel cigarette commercial where they said "I'd Walk a Mile For a Camel", but in this case its about walking a mile for a friendship with a nice woman...james
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