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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2016-05-10 06:28 AM





Feather of Grace
you tickle my soul
until my heart giggles,
my belly laughs
and my joy
sheds tears.

© Copyright 2016 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2016-05-10 07:36 AM


Love the title, Lori, the poem, especially the last line. I relate to it.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

jwesley
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2 posted 2016-05-10 09:03 AM


Actually a wonderful piece, my friend.  Hope everyone has those thoughts today!
'Lori Grosser Rhoden encourages Constructive Critiques: "I can take it" . . . here, honey,
'Take It!' . . .

Like I said in another piece this morning ---
I haven't had my coffee yet this morning!!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2016-05-12 11:14 AM


Jerry and Jimmy,
Thanks for reading my little flight of whimsy. I was actually inspired by Ellen DeGeneres. She has become part of my mental health routine. ~L

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2016-06-27 10:05 PM


wonderful feelings within this...james
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2016-06-28 09:36 AM


Thank you very much James! ~L
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