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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2016-05-06 12:01 PM


    One Moment of Your Love

  A gently playful sunrise
  ignites the wildflowers
  fresh with morning dew.
  The soft summer breeze
  dances through willows
  and a cloudless azure sky
  along this ancient stream  
  that whispers, over shining
  multi-colored rocks, its
   ‘Deep-time’ secrets in a
  story of perfect impermanence.
  One moment of your love,
  if I might capture it from
  the gardens of eternity,
  would outshine these
  and all the kingdoms and
  riches that have ever been
  or could ever be.

                    --- b. e. adams (5/6/2016)


© Copyright 2016 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2016-05-07 11:16 PM


You do capture that single moment that takes ones breath away.  Well done dreamy poet...
secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2016-05-08 04:17 AM


thank you !!
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2016-05-09 09:58 PM


enjoyed...james
Pete_W
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4 posted 2016-05-10 05:12 AM


Nice imagery perhaps heightened by loss. Enjoyed.
secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2016-05-10 09:02 PM


thank you JM and Pete !
secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2016-05-10 09:02 PM


thank you JM and Pete !
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