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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-04-27 07:45 PM





Gulls scream their carrion cries
Circling with stiff and frozen wings
Tip feathers finger the rising air
Glide, ride, the spiralling thermals
~
Waves born in the ocean whirlpool
Flying spangled spindrift banners
Roaring, rolling, defiant thunder,
Crashing to oblivion on the wild west wind
~
The probing tide eludes the sentinels
Seeking out the granite caverns
Seeping through clandestine tunnels
To reach a deep forgotten secret
~
Rock pools provide a living oasis
Scuttling crabs and skipping shrimps
Cloud the jade green opalescence
Tranquillity welcomes the ebbing tide


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Ari Squire
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In The Phallus Lane
1 posted 2016-05-01 01:24 AM


What a colorful, incredible ride this poetry of yours is Cari. You must be extremely sensitive to your own environs and those you've traveled to in order to interpret them to such a fine-tuned degree.

Cheers.


More feelings and fewer words please

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