navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #49 » Prisoners of the Dust
Open Poetry #49
Post A Reply Post New Topic Prisoners of the Dust Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2016-04-15 02:15 PM


  Prisoners of the Dust

I saw today two lone
eagles in joyous flight,
the very finest form of
living and visual poetry,
dancing with clouds,
dappled sunbeams, and
absolute abandon in
an endless azure sky,
with their unblinking
view beyond the
farthest horizons  
to all possible ends
of this lovely world.
What must they think
of this trembling
earthbound land of
men ... prisoners
of the dust?

             --- b. e. adams (4/15/2016)


© Copyright 2016 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2016-04-15 02:45 PM


Don't believe they think of us at all, Bruce. I imagine they are much too invigorated riding the powerful waves of the air. Nice poetry. I love eagles . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (04-15-2016 03:16 PM).]

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2016-04-15 09:17 PM


I love eagles (and California condors) too !
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2016-04-16 02:31 AM


I love eagles too and this is a fantastic poem.
Have to keep this one.
                             Ida

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
4 posted 2016-04-16 04:18 AM


Thanks, Ida !

Eagles are making a 'comeback' here in the 'endless' hills of old Appalachia ... even in the town called Eagles Mere. ...

       Eagles Mere,  Pa

The ‘Endless’ mountain road
winds ever upward
through crackling-cold air
and the wild, keen music
   of sunrise …
to which eagles once danced
    airborne arabesques,
reflected in mirror-lake ecstasy;
and soft snow-feather trees
tickle glowering clouds
to the edge of silent laughter …
by ‘the town that Time forgot,’
where Nature still speaks
in a voice of quiet thunder,
to those who cherish
the old ways of listening,
seeing, and being!

                --- b. e. adams

booky1940!
Member
since 2009-04-16
Posts 136
Canada
5 posted 2016-04-16 09:34 AM


Prisoners of the dust! That's true for everyone and everything, but there is hope for the soul that trust the Lord!
Thanks for sharing, may you be blessed!

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane
6 posted 2016-04-16 07:33 PM


Eagles are a majestic creature, but so are all birds with large wingspans. Many naturally love the eagle over other species for specific reasons I'm not well connected with. All birds are beautiful in their way, but eagles, herons, cranes and even the loathsome chicken-hawk and turkey-buzzards are awesome in flight. Its the same with airplanes. If a Cessna 172 flies over your turf, you watch it some, but if a 747 flies over at the same altitude, it definitely has your attention. Your poem strikes me at that level Bruce...Awesome.

More feelings and fewer words please

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
7 posted 2016-04-16 09:23 PM


Thanks "booky" and Ari !
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2016-04-18 09:47 PM


they could be hoping their was more unobstructive airspace and more safer places to land...as we expand they must regress...james
secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
9 posted 2016-04-19 10:12 PM


Thank you for commenting, JM !
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #49 » Prisoners of the Dust

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary