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Cari
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Posts 411
Englnand

0 posted 2016-04-15 05:31 AM

The first kiss

Softly given, softly taken

Inquiring intensity, seeking

for the fires yet to come

You lead, I follow

You teach, I learn

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2016-04-15 10:45 AM

Oh yes indeed, I well remember those teaching and learning days.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

2 posted 2016-04-16 07:45 PM

Neither could teach, so we both learned. It came so natural, we both went on to teach others. We felt it made the world go 'round a bit nicer, like your poetry Cari.

More feelings and fewer words please

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2016-04-17 08:50 AM

When I was 16, I had an 18 year old girlfriend.

This poem reminds me of that situation.

Thanks for the memories,Cari
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[This message has been edited by ice (04-17-2016 10:47 AM).]

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2016-04-17 10:48 AM

Sorry, ment Thanks Cari, not Jerry

Cari
Member
Posts 411
Englnand

5 posted 2016-04-17 11:38 AM

Thanks for reading guys.

Not every such a blissful encounter can be pleasantly mind-blowing.
I asked a girl out for dinner and she suggested a restaurant in Camden Town (London) which was a favourite of hers and I agreed.

“Here we are” she said.

I stared at the name above the door. La Creperie.
OMG!! I must have been so keen on the date I forgot to mention my loathing of garlic, the smell, the taste and even the sight of the bloody little bulb.

While I settled for the poached Turbot, she happily munched her way through the menu.

Later at her front door she flung her arms around me and her lips met mine in a kiss she had evidently borrowed from a second rate movie, you know the one I mean, the type that searches for your bloody tonsils.

I did something heroic that night in that I manfully resisted the overpowering urge to throw up. Needless to say it was a very short affair, one night in fact.

Cari.

[This message has been edited by Cari (04-17-2016 12:52 PM).]

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