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DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

0 posted 2016-04-09 04:38 PM

alone in my bed
silvery moonlight bathes me
tucked beneath its glow

If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time.

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2016-04-09 04:50 PM

Oh, I like this-can relate.

I can remember feeling something like this as a child,

(being)--------"alone in my bed
(feeling this)-silvery moonlight bathes me
(and being)----tucked beneath its glow"

Thanks for stirring the memory pot.. :-)

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2016-04-09 06:08 PM

Yes, I imagine most of us are able to relate to those days . . .
Some of the scariest times of my childhood were spent
huddled beneath the blankets and quilts hiding from
the badman man.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2016-04-09 08:57 PM

fine writing...james

Ari Squire
Member
Posts 488
In The Phallus Lane

4 posted 2016-04-10 03:25 AM

I was looking for something to warm myself with Miss Days. Thank you for providing it and the extra bonus of a smile.

More feelings and fewer words please

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 2016-04-10 02:23 PM

Beautiful image...can feel the peace resonating off it.

Michael

DaysofView
Member

since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

6 posted 2016-04-10 10:31 PM

Thank you so much everyone for your super nice comments!

If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time.

Cari
Member
Posts 411
Englnand

7 posted 2016-04-14 08:43 AM

Ah, our childhood bed where, under the cover,s you could be a fairy princess and I could join the legions of the valiant, where did it all go?

So very true, well done.

Cari.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2016-04-14 11:31 AM

I too relate in memories to the sweet and cozy atmosphere you evoke here. A real "feel good" offering, thank you!

Love,
Margherita

"Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance."
(Rumi)

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