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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2016-03-29 11:05 PM


   The Music of Ordinary Days

     When night and mist
     have drawn their veils
     about this Earth and
     every mundane trial
     and care of the day,
     it is then that I most
     know and celebrate
     every joy and sorrow
     that share my heart
     in the want of you.
     I would gladly empty
     my mind of all the
     dreams it has ever
       gathered
     for but one moment
       of your love,
     and each fiber of my
     ever passionate soul
     sings the music of you
     and the fine grace you
     bring to my life and
     this tired world.

                   --- b. e. adams  (3/29/2016)



© Copyright 2016 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2016-03-30 12:43 PM


nice...james
secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2016-03-30 04:46 AM


Thanks, JM !
BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2016-03-31 12:36 PM


Your dream poetry is all that!
Beautiful music DP.

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2016-03-31 09:04 PM


Thank you ...
Marchmadness
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5 posted 2016-04-03 01:39 AM


So beautiful Bruce.
               Ida

secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2016-04-03 06:10 AM


Thanks Ida !
Ari Squire
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7 posted 2016-04-05 02:36 PM


quote:
"it is then that I most
     know and celebrate
     every joy and sorrow
     that share my heart
     in the want of you.
     I would gladly empty
     my mind of all the
     dreams it has ever
       gathered
     for but one moment
       of your love"
There were many, but only one fills my thoughts, and this as you wrote, I would also do if only I could. Stunning words my friend, to my core.

More feelings and fewer words please

secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 2016-04-05 09:36 PM


Thanks, Ari !
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