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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-03-20 07:28 PM



Summer.


The speckled Thrush provides a counterpoint
For the Blackbirds hopeful love songs
Joined by the whistling postman
Steady white knee peddling
Down the lanes of early morning

Summer calls through wistful windows
To the sweaty shirt sleeved wage slaves
Living on recycled breath
In those stacked convenient prisons
Half a mile from Charing Cross

Parade you flouncing long legged girls
In your summer skirted fashions
Laughing at the feasting eyes
Smiling at the backward glances
As old men yearn and hunger
For return to younger days
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
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1 posted 2016-03-20 09:39 PM


quote:
Parade you flouncing long legged girls
In your summer skirted fashions
Laughing at the feasting eyes
Smiling at the backward glances
As old men yearn and hunger
For return to younger days

Ab-so-lutely! Now THAT'S what I call the good old summertime . . . er . . . springtime! Gotta love it!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2016-03-21 07:15 PM


ahh summer, but first spring, but then though the clocks have already been forwarded 1 hour, it's still winter cold here, winter not yet wanting to give up her hold on the weather.
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2016-03-22 12:44 PM


Same verse Jerry quoted and anybody says they don't steal a look is lying.

Love the summer!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

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