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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2016-03-14 10:38 AM


Feeling Lifted

Today, the rainy days are here
But a smile has lifted the moment's drear
For old friends whose memories rise
When seeing words brings tears to eyes.

Not ones of sadness, although with time
The losses of friendships and family (mine).
But wishes for all who bear the weight
A future where caring is never too late

For time that's left in friendships' hold
One's words are treasured as if in gold.

Always, M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2016-03-14 10:52 AM


quote:
A future where caring is never too late

Ne'er truer words spoken.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2016-03-14 11:31 AM


Got up this morning to my normal morning ritual, rubbing the sleep away, first thing necessaries and . . . yes! - Coffee's Done!
But instead of sitting down with the first cup and watching what's called "News" now-a-days,
I pulled up PiP, - WoW, what a start to the day! First line on the forum - Your Smiling Face!

Now That made my whole day worthwhile!

Good to see you, my friend, and know you're well - My thoughts, invisible though they are, are often surrounding you.

jimmy


nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2016-03-14 05:20 PM


Thank you, Jerry. And Jimmy as always your responses make me smile. I,too just happened to peak in this morning and read a few, bringing back memories of old friends and warm hearts. M
latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
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4 posted 2016-03-15 03:07 AM


Hello.It is late or early morning.I am a night owl. Good to see you here and love your words. best to you, JO
latearrival
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5 posted 2016-03-15 03:59 AM


So good to see you back. Take care,best,JO
ethome
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6 posted 2016-03-15 10:03 AM


"A future where caring is never too late

For time that's left in friendships' hold
One's words are treasured as if in gold."

Beautiful words Maureen, you haven't lost your touch or your gentle wisdom..

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

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7 posted 2016-03-15 09:47 PM


Ms M ~ Great to read you again. Beautiful poem.

A

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2016-03-15 11:05 PM


very nice...james
XGarapanX
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Antarctica
9 posted 2016-03-17 06:18 AM


As always, very solid and relatable.
Goldenrose
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10 posted 2016-03-17 07:11 PM


Well I may not get along to these pages much these days but it is good to see that some things never change.M your words are beautifully caring and kind as ever,thank you for sharing....

Goldenrose

walk the moonlight path through the dark woods...i await your return..

Balladeer
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11 posted 2016-03-18 05:46 PM


Your words are always treasured, Maureen
This Errant Knight
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Paradise
12 posted 2016-03-25 07:41 AM


Lady 'O' I see thy form is as fine as it has ever been.
Marchmadness
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So. El Monte, California
13 posted 2016-04-03 01:43 AM


So true Maureen.

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