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Cari
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Posts 411
Englnand

0 posted 2016-03-06 09:50 AM



Springtime in Suburbia


Acacia Avenue
Mock Tudor boxes
Cloned for conformity
In red brick reserve
~
Regimented daffodils
Yellow trumpet nodding
To friends and family
Over chess board drives
~
Morning rituals
Ecclesiastic sponging
of Sunday standing Volvos
Thirty percent down and five years to pay
~
Dosing cats, needle teeth yawning
Restless dogs, boredom barking
Rumble of mowers, panzer rolling
Across green sculptured lawns
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Elsie Parker, avoids the mirror
Searches for comfort chocolate
Sighs for the might have been
Behind closed doors
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Teenage soldier dressed for action
Designer jeans, margarine hair
Pockets the cell phone, grins at the promise
of lunchtime larger and the everyday girls
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Author note.

A word of explanation on the use of the word ‘reserve’.
The meaning in the context of the poem is for the English wish for privatesy i.e. ‘Don’t invade my space unless you are invited to’.
A visitor to our country will at some stage encounter this middle class attitude to strangers. We don’t make eye contact and smile at passing people in the street, it’s a cultural thing.

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ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2016-03-06 10:44 AM


Excellent work, as I knew it would be...

"Dosing cats, needle teeth yawning
Restless dogs, boredom barking
Rumble of mowers, panzer rolling
Across green sculptured lawns'

Yes, the "panzers" will start to roll here soon..

In this land of
"little boxes, all made out of ticky tacky
And they all look the same."

Note:
I am glad your read my March poem, and also glad you posted this one..

'Tis the season for such--bring them on.

"Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance."
Carl Sandburg

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2016-03-06 04:01 PM


Ah, Cari, you do know a few things about putting your words together and making them count. I had learned the description the English give to "reserve," quite a few years ago. I did not learn it in class, but from a classy lady named Christina. I absolutely loved this new poem of yours, somehow, you always seem to give of yourself within the lines.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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