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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2016-02-13 01:07 PM



In so many ways you
show me
how much you love me.
In the mornings you
perfectly
fix my coffee.
During the day you
call me
just to hear me.
In the car you
gently
reach for my hand.
At night you
always
pull me close and hold me
and then you
softly
kiss and tell me.
You leave no doubt
as to who your heart
is all about.
In more than a few ways
you show me
your heart is true and always
about me.
Every day you show me
why you are the love of my life
and I am a blessed wife.


LGRĀ©2/13/16

© Copyright 2016 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2016-02-13 01:13 PM


What a beautiful poem of love. I'm so happy for you, Lori.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2016-02-13 01:41 PM


This is a very beautiful Valentine, dear Lori. It's wonderful to be aware of being blessed. Your grateful words induce a reflection and I feel like going to hug my husband ...

Love,
Margherita

"Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance."
(Rumi)

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2016-02-13 02:44 PM


Lori
That's as nice a poem as anyone could ever read about love.
The little things amount to heap of good things don't they?

Good work!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2016-02-19 08:05 PM


wonderful... the love is going both ways...james
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