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Go to Hell with You
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Go to Hell with You |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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I was taught back in Sunday School, That craving and the act were the same, And God rebukes your craving fool, No matter if you fanned the flame. So! If we are punished, us two, And to hell’s fires we must descend, Come then, and let me stir your roux, I’d rather go to hell with a friend! ©January 19, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
ha! You make a good point. I'm sure hell has a 2 for 1 plan! Nice write ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Good morning, Lori, and thank you . . . |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Nothing better than a stirred up roux...:-) Hope that sauce was good and hot... Im a dirty, old man that likes this poem... "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You're right about that roux, Ice, and thank you. I'm a dirty old man that wrote this poem. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He he, very catching title! Stir stir never wears out.....LOL Dennis Quaide playing Gerry Lee Lewis said, "if I'm going to hell, I'm going there playing my pianny!" Just another type of duo... Good one Jerry true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Loved your "Stir stir never wears out," line. Yep Quaide played Jerry Lee very good., ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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