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Heart on stage |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * * * We shared smiles and it felt like sunshine on rainy days. But now, we shared a tear and it felt like a thousand suns parading within my heart space. * * * |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Margherita, Oh how true your words are! There have been some sad times during which the out pouring of others has touched me to the point of feeling a kind of joy that defies the sadness. Is seems miraculous to me. ~L |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
smiles and rainbows in your tears Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, it is amazing what sadness can bring to an otherwise happy person. Whether the sadness comes through personal experiences, or sadness because we hurt for someone we care about who is having difficulties in life. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, dear Lori, it is miraculous. Thank you, dear friend, for your understanding and most kind comment. Thank you, dear Michael, for your loving comment. Yes, when we are able to deeply share our fragility, the tears transform into pearls with rainbow colors. Dear Jerry, thank you for your warm comment. Strangely, sometimes a moment of true compassion coming from a friend brings such an amount of solace, that it is felt more intensely than a happy smile. It becomes a process of cleansing and sadness can be overcome more easily. Love and light. Margherita "Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance." |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I know about those tears, Margherita. You say it so well. Ida |
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quatro04 Junior Member Posts 12 |
I enjoyed your poem. I can relate to the emotions described here. Well done. |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
It's all part of being human isn't it! Those up and down things we all have I mean. Me too but the sad ones I try harder to lose. Happy ones can stay as long as they like! Love your poem and pic! If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
The picture fits the poem perfectly. Deep, and emotional work, Margherita.. I am moved in different ways when I read your work..that makes your poetry a must read for me.. "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
this resonates deeply in those places that wear the joys and the tears, sometimes simultaneously, both making us human |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...james |
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MissMarti Member Posts 87 USA |
The picture is perfect for your heartfelt words! I always love what you write! Hugs, Marti "You will never regret being kind!" |
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booky1940! Member
since 2009-04-16
Posts 136Canada |
A poem, indeed, really beautiful! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Ida, thank you so much for relating to this thought. Those are truly intense moments, we feel understood. Dear Naome, thank you for your loving comment and for telling me that you too can relate. Thank you, dear Stacy Lynn, for your most kind reply. It is almost impossible not to experience some sad moments. When we reach out and when we can share those moments, it's a great gift. Dear Ford, what a warm reply from you, thank you from my heart. Yes, "deep and emotional" is correct. It pleases me that you like to read my words. Dear EmmaRose, you are right it happens just as you say. Thank you for being here again and for your loving comment. Thank you, dear James, for stopping by and for enjoying my words. Dear Marti, it is reciprocal! Thank you so much for your loving comment. Hugs to you too! I enjoyed your reply, dear booky1940! Thank you kindly. Love and joy. Margherita  "Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance." |
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