Open Poetry #49 |
Beauty of the Coconut Trees |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beauty of the Coconut Trees As the waves come washing to the shore I play my ukulele to the woman I adore and as she smiles I sing a song, and she keeps smiling and softly sings along to the words of my warm and romantic love song; our song tells a story of two lovers never wishing to part, because they truly love each other with all of their hearts; as I sing this song she sings along, as I tell her of my hopes and dreams it seems to be a sweet love song, so I tell her as long as the waves come to this shore, she will be the woman I adore, and I tell her how she touches my heart and fulfills all my dreams among other romantic things; the moon seems to be in agreement with her and me, shining on us brightly as we sing among the coconut trees, and now they seem to sway along with our song, almost like they want to sing along, sharing our song on the sandy shore, under the silky moon, my sweetheart and me, and the beauty of the coconut trees. JamesLee 2-4-16 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Oh, but of course the trees sing along, dear James. This is truly enchanting, I am smiling in appreciation of your sweet love poem! Love, Margherita "Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance." |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
your words are like silk, so romantic, and they open the door of journeys, thanks yann |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
and I tell her how she touches my heart and fulfills all my dreams among other romantic things; the moon seems to be in agreement with her and me, shining on us brightly as we sing among the coconut trees, James you are undoubtedly the true romantic. Well done! true love never looks after it's own interests |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
enjoyed, my friend. j. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
James, keep the serenading going, just be careful - kipping an eye out for falling coconuts. Excellent writing, my friend. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
How romantic! I can just picture it! Great write! ~L |
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