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ice
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since 2003-05-17
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0 posted 2016-02-04 07:13 PM


    

Another meager attempt at making a picture better, by adding a few poetic words..although the picture is a poem by itself.

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jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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1 posted 2016-02-04 07:35 PM


Words absolutely fit the picture my friend. Very well done.

j.

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2016-02-04 07:36 PM


Well done Ice and that is a great pic!
Your words fit it perfectly.

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2016-02-04 10:03 PM


Gettin' artsy, Ice and you have done it well. The picture compliments your poem magnificently.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2016-02-05 04:08 AM


  Sensitive and thoughtful poem ice.
                         Ida

Cari
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Englnand
5 posted 2016-02-05 05:24 AM


Quite the best combination of picture and poem I’ve read. Brilliant my friend.

Cari.

ice
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6 posted 2016-02-05 05:36 AM


Thank you, friends.
This picture was taken by a British, poet friend of mine..many poems could be written, and pasted on it...

Your comments are more than I expected, at least on the words.

"Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance."
Carl Sandburg

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
7 posted 2016-02-06 04:58 PM


Indeed! How fragile humans are when they arrive on Earth! Almost a whole year will be needed to learn to walk!

How gentle and poignant the picture and your words, dear Ford. I enjoyed this much.

Love,
Margherita

"Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance."
(Rumi)

ice
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8 posted 2016-02-07 04:42 AM


Visual, and audio inspiration have great appeal to me.

The tiny foot, a beautiful song, the stigma of flower, a womans soft voice..gentle things of life, that balance out the hard things life has chosen as appealing to me.

This picture stirred something in me.

Thank you for the reply.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2016-02-17 09:43 PM


nice...the picture and the words...james
rainyday
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Heartland USA
10 posted 2016-02-21 07:45 PM


Oh...You did the pic justice Ice,
this warms the heart.

Enjoyed,
J

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