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Ticklefingers
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0 posted 2016-01-27 11:12 AM


you've no room to talk
from all that I've seen and heard
I still have your keys

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2016-01-27 11:18 AM


Sounds simple and straightforward to moi.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Ticklefingers
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2 posted 2016-01-27 07:41 PM


That it is JerryPat!

Many thanks amigo!

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Margherita
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3 posted 2016-01-28 12:51 PM


Having no room to talk makes me anxious and your words indeed hold a touch of threat ...

The menacing power is in the keys ... three lines show material enough for a movie, I tell you.

Meanwhile ....



Margherita

Ticklefingers
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4 posted 2016-01-28 09:39 PM


I know it's silly, but sometimes I have 'words' with my keyboard!

'She' says I'm being too rough and I argue that I'll pound her as I like and 'she' needs to learn to take it and LIKE IT or I'll unplug her and go pound the old upright!

We have a love/hate relationship.

(Careful now, I can hear what you're thinking!)

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

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