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Open Poetry #49

Having Needs

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2016-01-23 05:06 PM

Having Needs


In early morning light
she smiles and lights up the world;
she takes my hand
as if she needs
an outlet for her love,
and I receive her love,
like a mighty rushing wind;
will she kiss me,
shall I kiss her?
We shall see!
In the moonlight
she shines like an angel,
I am thankful.

JamesLee
1/23/16

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2016-01-24 01:50 PM

This is so lovely, dear James! I enjoy your romantic poems greatly. You always express your emotions with loving kindness.

Love,
Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2016-01-24 02:30 PM

quote:
In the moonlight
she shines like an angel,

These two lines are absolutely perfection . . . eh . . . The rest of the poem ain't bad either, James.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2016-01-25 10:20 AM

hi james, words of love and only words of love give directions, what a nice penning
yann

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2016-01-27 08:07 PM

Thank you Margherita and JerryPat and 2islander2 for the nice response...james

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