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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-01-15 10:27 AM





I can grant your every wish
And laugh at your choices
~
Plat the strings of emotion
And bind you tight to lost causes
~
Mix your desires
Into a whirlpool of lust
~
I can sell you contentment
And call later with the bill
~
But I can give you what you long for
And bestow years of happiness

~

My name?

My name is love.

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2016-01-15 10:52 AM


Pretty well sums it up, Cari!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2016-01-15 02:48 PM


Many interpretations are reserved to the term "Love", indeed we adore love when it is full of promises "the state of being in love", which makes us blind and irrational. Then we begin to add ingredients of poisonous emotions and we transform it into something totally different. LOVE in its highest meaning is incorruptible.

I enjoyed your take on it, it is thought provoking.

Marghrita

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2016-01-16 01:00 AM


very nice, it surprised me
yann


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