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MissMarti
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0 posted 2016-01-13 09:25 AM




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ROOTS

You spring from these souls
A strange mix of genetics
Our roots are endless




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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2016-01-13 10:05 AM


Yep, I know where you are coming from with this one MissMarti!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

DaysofView
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Just A Slice Of The Pie
2 posted 2016-01-13 07:15 PM


That's because we're all family under the bark! Cool poem and an awesome picture Miss Marti!

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

MissMarti
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3 posted 2016-01-14 07:46 AM


Jerry/Pat ... Thanks for replying! Just a quick little haiku to go with this amazing graphic!
MissMarti
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4 posted 2016-01-14 07:48 AM


DaysofView ... We are all the same under the bark! Great response, thank you!
Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2016-01-15 06:39 PM


Beautiful words and a surprisingly vivid life tree! Everybody seems to be fit and having a great time, except the Fathers with canes burdened with a humanity who does not apply the law of love and forgets the common roots which make us all ONE.

Great offering, MissMarti.

Margherita

Mr Martini
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Beneath The Line
6 posted 2016-01-16 12:19 PM


That our "roots are endless" is an insightful view Miss Marti. What it is we (as a people) find ourselves 'rooted in' at times however, is somewhat questionable.

Lovely poetry mon cher.

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

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