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Ticklefingers
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0 posted 2016-01-06 03:37 PM


subdued applauding
            a crash dummy audience
                      his first open-mic

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

© Copyright 2016 Danny - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2016-01-06 04:07 PM


I'm liking this, leaves a lot to the imagination.
Margherita
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2 posted 2016-01-08 06:34 PM


Intriguing. And if you had glasses on they would have misted up ... Sounds funny but you know what I mean. First time I was asked to read the lectures in church I couldn't see a thing because of my emotion.

I am sure the applause grew stronger for you at every new performance.

Margherita

Ticklefingers
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3 posted 2016-01-08 06:40 PM


Thanks Blues and Margherita! You're a coupla' swell gals!

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2016-01-08 06:55 PM


Ahhh . . . I can just imagine, Ticklefingers, reminds me of the first time I did an interview for a television station about the latest book of mine. I felt like I was a complete idiot, but I got through it, as did this fellow in this poem.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Ticklefingers
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5 posted 2016-01-08 07:21 PM


You betcha JerryPat!

Sometimes I wish I could get nervous. At least something would raise my pulse!

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2016-01-08 07:29 PM


Ahhh . . . Methinks you get that high rate of pulse every so often, man

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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