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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2016-01-05 08:13 PM




Love in Action


As I picked her up
in my old pick-up truck
I couldn't help
but think and anticipate
of the beauty of her lips
is they are full of tenderness;
and now I can feel them,
and now I taste them,
and to me this
is satisfaction,
to me this is love
in action.


JamesLee
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DaysofView
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1 posted 2016-01-05 08:43 PM


Thank you JamesMichael for your nice reply to my poem. Billy and me have an older Ford pickup and we have a lots of fun driving and sometimes just sitting out of town in it talking and kinda acting like in your sweet poem too!
Thanks again and I love your poem!

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

sim0riah
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2 posted 2016-01-05 09:42 PM


Nice James! Good to see your still around these parts.
Margherita
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3 posted 2016-01-06 03:48 PM


Oh yes, there are many ways to describe "love in action" and I really like what you have offered us here, dear James.

Margherita

Charisma
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4 posted 2016-01-06 05:13 PM


very nice...love in action it is
secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2016-01-07 04:43 AM


yes indeed !
Cari
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6 posted 2016-01-08 01:23 PM


Sadly we don’t have pickup trucks in the UK, we make do with beat up old bangers and misty windows, seems to work Ok though. We do have a surprise waiting for our American drivers—roundabouts. One told us that he went round five times before he got off the damn thing, unfortunately at the wrong exit.

Keep trucking.
Cari.

J. K. Mitchell
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7 posted 2016-01-17 08:56 PM


So beautiful.
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2016-01-22 08:53 PM


Thank you DaysofView, SimOriah, Margherita, Charisma, secondhanddreampoet, cari and J.K. Mitchell for the nice response.  Keep them old pick-up trucks moving...james
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