Open Poetry #49 |
Sarah |
Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
She sleeps now Innocence in miniature Pink purity on the web of life Safe harboured on comfort breasts Protection from unwanted dreams ~ We look with wonder, Across the stepping stones of time So many paths from which to choose So many hearts to break and capture Together, we share a smile. A little poem for our fourth daughter. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
What a sweet verse to give to your new daughter. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
. . . and I am certain she will break many, many hearts! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wish you well, my friends - hug her for me too!! j. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
How perfect and befitting a gift! The poem is precious as I am sure your daughter is as well! ~L |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sorry. .I have no idea what just happened with my reply |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sorry. .I have no idea what just happened with my reply |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
4 girls sounds like a lot of fun going on at your house! I only have a brother and I always wanted a sister, but my brother is a good guy too. I'm very happy for you Cari and I think you write awesome poetry! It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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