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DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01
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Just A Slice Of The Pie

0 posted 2015-12-29 08:02 PM


Soft fur and cat eyes
purring and shining
with each stroke of her hand

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2015-12-29 08:04 PM



Ahhh . . . i can just picture her stroking the kitty's back and listening to its purring! Great picture in my mind.

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Ticklefingers
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Posts 710
Louisiana
2 posted 2015-12-30 11:44 AM


Cats do like to be pampered and this poetry of yours Miss View expresses it very well indeed.

88's gal

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2015-12-30 11:10 PM


my sister loves her cat...james
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