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Mr Martini
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Beneath The Line

0 posted 2015-12-23 07:42 PM


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_D2fC3NEhyA&list=RD_D2fC3NEhyA

Heart shaped twisters
Cut a swath through my desires
Raising the dead in me
Casting shadows which hide me
From what I do

Night crawlers slither
From their soiled homes
As my spade severs
The slow ones in pieces

Though hung by the neck
Her body was still firm
As I pulled her up from
The depths of her grave

Consuming the last of her
Was an act I could not restrain
The closer to her bones
The sweeter was the meat

With each morsel I chewed
The taste of my lover's lips
Rolled over my tongue
      She spent her last with him

               Now I spend my last with her

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

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rainyday
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Posts 304
Heartland USA
1 posted 2015-12-23 11:38 PM


Ahhh..Mr. M you're going all Hannibal
on us, but..you do it well.

CHEERS
rainy

Mr Martini
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Posts 366
Beneath The Line
2 posted 2015-12-24 11:34 AM


Thank you rainy. I was going to have dinner with her again over the holidays, but my freezer failed when I was vacationing. When I returned, well, like the lazy farmer said, "too much rainy spoils the Otis".

Thanks for the holiday wishes. Maybe I'll have pizza this year if I can find some good sausage.

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2015-12-25 08:31 AM


I thought I responded to this already. what I thought I said was that it puts a whole new spin on chewing the fat...  ~L
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