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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2015-12-23 05:00 AM



For a small town girl
Alone in the sprawl of the creaking metropolis
She kept to the bustle of the hurrying crowd
Lacking the courage to explore
London’s surfeit of nooks and crannies

Where Dickens once walked the
Victorian cobbled alleys and beyond
Passed unnoticed by wide eyed tourists
Harried by their clip board minders
Mindful to keep to the tight schedule.

Long enough now for wonder to subside
With time to absorb the lessons to be learnt
By taking the bus over Westminster Bridge
To avoid the Tube’s rush hour crush of humanity
and the wandering hands of marauding touchy feelers

Friends are hard to find north of the Thames
Work time colleagues return home to suburbia
Leaving London to the empting streets
Feral cats emerge to scavenge the waste bins
While the bag lady beds down in a vacant doorway

In an Italian coffee house on the Lambeth embankment
She found a special place to sit and scribble
Where the customers provided flesh for her characters
Where Giovanni breaks into song when the trade slackens
and Amor di Pastorello is in tune with the lapping tide




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Margherita
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1 posted 2015-12-23 06:40 AM


You succeeded very well in describing the atmosphere of London from the viewpoint of a single girl. Big towns can be the loneliest places in the world at times.

I am glad the girl found that special Italian coffee house where a touch of human warmth could be experienced.



Margherita


ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
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2 posted 2015-12-23 06:40 AM


Oh Yea... this is street poetry at its best..
Inspired by daily life, like Lou Reed used to do..

"I'm no urban idiot savant spewing paint without any order
I'm no sphinx, no mystery enigma
What I paint is very ordinary"
Lou Reed , from "Images"

Excelent read....Thanks Cari

"Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance."
Carl Sandburg

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
3 posted 2015-12-23 09:07 AM


Hah! Reminded me, a young man from small town Arkansas, and my very first foray into metropolitan New York City.

~ Do what you have to do to feel right,
I'll do my best to be alright. ~

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
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Florida
4 posted 2015-12-23 10:08 AM


Enjoyed this story as I was once separated from a group in Rome and had to find my way. An enlightening experience at best. Thanks for the memory. jo perry
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2015-12-28 08:16 PM


wonderful...james
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