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DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01
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Just A Slice Of The Pie

0 posted 2015-12-23 01:37 AM


Billy Joe and me
went to buy a Christmas tree
in our old ford truck

we found a scotch pine
after we found a scotch pint
tree and we loaded

drive down old thirteen
then the truck began to lean
a scotch pine bailout

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

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Mr Martini
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Posts 366
Beneath The Line
1 posted 2015-12-23 02:22 AM


With a pint of Scotch my good woman, you should not have been on any road in any vehicle. I am happy to see you here to write about it.

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2015-12-23 06:02 AM


Goodness gracious, dear Stacy Lynn, you are quite the couple of adventurers I'd say! Was fun to read, but I guess and hope you'll be thinking twice before repeating the experience.



Margherita

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2015-12-23 09:02 AM


Eh . . . Sometimes we just have to set aside certain rules and do as we will. Even so, you can count yourself lucky that all you lost was the tree.

~ Do what you have to do to feel right,
I'll do my best to be alright. ~

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