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DaysofView
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Just A Slice Of The Pie

0 posted 2015-12-20 07:37 PM


memories of gold
are just memories of gold
not legal tender

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-12-20 07:45 PM


Eh . . . Works for me, DV.

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

DaysofView
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2 posted 2015-12-20 07:47 PM


thanks!

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

Pete_W
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3 posted 2015-12-20 10:49 PM


And yet are more valuable than any amount of gold. Enjoyed.
Thanks
Pete

DaysofView
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4 posted 2015-12-20 10:58 PM


Thanks Petey! You really get it!

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2015-12-21 05:05 AM


How lucky we are to have those memories of gold.

Well rendered, dear Stacy Lynn.



Margherita

ice
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6 posted 2015-12-21 08:21 AM


LIKE IT! Like Frost said "nothing gold can last"

enjoyed

"Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance."
Carl Sandburg

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