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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2015-12-19 10:15 PM


      Each New Tomorrow

Soft lunar shadows dance
with quick-silver moonbeams
to the plaintiff tune of a pure
   Winter wind
on this night of Autumn passing.
A silent evening frost paints
this great broad Earth in
cold-fantastic forms,
with the brush of infinitesimal
moments and eternal change,
under a boundless mantle
of ever-spinning constellations.
The mind and heart turn to
memories of all our loves
   forever lost;
yet a fledgling hope rises
and grows imperceptibly
   but inexorably
amid the finest dreams
of Love and each new
   tomorrow.

         --- b. e. adams (12/19/2015)


© Copyright 2015 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Mr Martini
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1 posted 2015-12-20 12:38 PM


"The mind and heart turn to
memories of all our loves
   forever lost"

Yes, and perhaps our own along with them Mr. Adams.

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2015-12-20 03:28 AM


yes indeed ... thank you for commenting on this 'write!'
Pete_W
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3 posted 2015-12-20 09:41 AM


Always find your work thought provoking; a dream is perhaps not the same as hope. Enjoyed. Thanks
Pete

Margherita
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4 posted 2015-12-20 10:28 AM


You beautifully perceived and rendered the song of hope which is sung permanently by the firmament.

Love is never lost, unless you identify it with a form, a name, but it's so much more. Love IS. It permeates you, it is you.

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2015-12-20 10:35 AM


thank you, Pete and Margherita!
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2015-12-21 09:26 PM


pleasure to read...james
secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2015-12-21 10:57 PM


thanks, JM !
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