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Mr Martini
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Beneath The Line

0 posted 2015-12-19 01:12 AM


Our fingers lay entwined
In embraces all their own
Loving in a forest of proclivity

Sparkling stardust
Falls from your eyes
As tears from an angel

Thin shafts of light
Curled like tendrils
Illuminate your face

Gentle as a child's hand
You have touched me
And my vagrant heart


Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2015-12-19 05:23 AM


Conceived in paradise to cause tremors on Earth! I think, Mr. Martini, today there will be heard quite a few thuds of hearts collapsing on dream meadows ...

Your "vagrant heart" inspires as it echoes throughout forests of proclivity.



Margherita

ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2015-12-19 06:19 AM


A nice concept-- a vagrant heat, has possibly found a home..

Smooth work Mr. M

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2015-12-19 08:01 AM


Kind Sir,
This is quite precious, a different facet of the gem that wrote ‘Breach of Trust’.  ~L

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana
4 posted 2015-12-19 10:42 AM


In the words of the late John Denver, "Someday's  A Diamond Someday's A Stone".

I agree with Miss Lori Martini. This is as radically different from yesterdays "Breach of Trust" as yin is to yang, diabolical to demure.

Those meds are really paying off.  

Okay, all kidding aside, this was fine poetry for anyone's heart. Its a wonderful human experience when someone touches us in such a loving way that it inspires our pen to glide so effortlessly across a page.


88's friend       

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

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