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Denial |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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You deny me? Do you not know my worth? I will place your soul in a living hearse, Made from the remnants of your breed, A nod from me summon a thousand swords, Each utterance carries it with doom of nations, I am a monster at my core, savagery boundless, Absolute consumption of you I require, Denial is but a small price you pay. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Eh . . . ~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
Are you threatening me? Oops! I didn't see this right away: quote:I was feeling threatened at first, but now I know I feel threatened! (Where's that damn Martini when you need him!} 88's bub  She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I know it made me uncomfortable when I read it. So what's up with that Xeonox? ~L |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
The poem is not a threat in anyway. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Xeonox It seems to me that this might be some sort of Mantra? Perhaps of some group of terrorists, such as the Daesh, madmen in Syria, Iraq, and other places in the world. Perhaps an incantation of other deliverers of terror,other mostly Religious fanatical bigots, and Racists- "The Lords Resistance Army"(Uganda,and the Central African Republic) The KKK, and Tim McVeigh in the U.S. also come to mind... --all classified in my mind as "Daesh" This is my perspective-this is what your poem says to me. |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
Yay! Ice just threw you a bucket, so start bailin' bub!  She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Interesting interpretation by ice, but not accurate. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Uhhhh ok, no cigar for that one...:-( But I tried.....:-) |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Well, then, what do you mean... |
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