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Mr Martini
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Posts 366
Beneath The Line

0 posted 2015-12-16 01:32 AM


An anomalous mist
In a forest of proclivity
A stark reminder
Of towering meadows
And sunken mountains
That placed my wishes
Alongside my ambitions
In an effort to borne
Of them twins
Yet of them today lay
Distinctions of yesterday
That are lost in...
An anomalous mist
In a forest of proclivity

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2015-12-16 04:14 AM


Wow, Mr. Martini, what fantastic imagery ... "towering meadows and sunken mountains" ...
I am captivated by your refined writing and I always find the opportunity to learn new words to store in my English vocabulary. Thank you for that!

Ok, and now let the fresh morning breeze disperse the mist of  this forest of proclivity!

Exquisite!

Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2015-12-16 05:58 AM


Kind Sir,
Margherita and I are forming a fan club! Thank you for my new favorite word, proclivity. ~L

ice
Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
3 posted 2015-12-16 06:32 AM


Proclivity, and anomaly are the two things that make a person unique...sticking strictly to each makes the person pretty boring...together they make a person interesting..

Well done MM

"Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance."
Carl Sandburg

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2015-12-16 08:17 AM


Ahhh . . . You are scoring big, Mr Martini, and I understand why, as simple wording as this beauty of a poem is, it is deep and very unique.

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

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