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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2015-12-12 05:41 PM


Wanna go out quick, yes, I do,
Don't wanna give death my adieu.
Want to look it in the eye and spit.
And if I have my strength I'll split.

Don't know which way I'd like to die,
Maybe stroking a young lasses thigh.
But I've got a brain which to think,
Maybe caress the lass's pink.

If you're around, that'd be just fine,
You're the young lass of my design.


© Copyright 2015 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2015-12-12 06:11 PM


You're gonna be alright my friend, you've got your pot of gold ...er, ah pink, at the end of the rainbow, so to speak. Whatever keeps ya goin' ~L
Ticklefingers
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Posts 710
Louisiana
2 posted 2015-12-12 07:31 PM


quote:
"Don't know which way I'd like to die,
Maybe stroking a young lasses thigh.
Maybe after those sensual strokes JerryPat, but not while doing it!

Superb!


88' pal

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2015-12-13 06:52 AM


You betcha Lori, you know where it's at.

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2015-12-13 06:54 AM


"not while doing it!" . . . said the Magik words Ticklefingers!

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

rainyday
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Heartland USA
5 posted 2015-12-13 11:23 AM


Ah..Ha, Good to have you back Poet JP.

rainy J

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2015-12-13 11:37 AM


Heh.Heh Thank you, rainy J, for your kind words.

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

Mr Martini
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Beneath The Line
7 posted 2015-12-14 12:56 PM


Mr. Bolton, I feel you're on to something. Stay strong and have the best ball you can until the music plays no more.

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2015-12-14 07:49 AM


Many thanks going to you, Mr Martini, for your encouragement.

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

J.J.thomas
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9 posted 2015-12-17 11:00 PM


I really liked this poem. gave me a smile. Thank you
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
10 posted 2015-12-18 07:13 AM


No, the "thanks" go out to you, J.J., and I do thank you.

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

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