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DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01
Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

0 posted 2015-12-11 08:50 PM


standard (aka 'stick')
is a little different
of a driving experience
than automatic is
but you still have to
turn the wheel when cornering
I change lanes
when I change my mind
I may use the turn signal
or I may not
its my call and its my ca
I'm doing the driving
If you're in another lane
and flip me off in a rage
I'll follow you to your last drop of gas
and then...KAPOW!!
if you're nice though
I'll wave to you,
and smile ear to ear
convertibles are a little bit different
of a driving experience than are hardtops
so its best to put the top up when it rains
and it rains baby

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2015-12-12 08:52 PM


Road rage as poetry...
Think i will just cruise along in the slow lane

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2015-12-13 11:02 AM


Made me smile. I don't like automatic ... it doesn't give that special feeling of symbiosis with the car ... and btw two pair of eyes and minds guarantee better for a wise driver attitude ...

Great write. Reminded me of my "Like Lightning McQueen" /pip/Forum105/HTML/000604.html



Margherita

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