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Ticklefingers
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Posts 710
Louisiana

0 posted 2015-12-11 06:50 PM


Wanting to touch you
To play for your broken heart
In an upstairs room

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

© Copyright 2015 Danny - All Rights Reserved
DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01
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Just A Slice Of The Pie
1 posted 2015-12-11 08:41 PM


Oh, I see. Take advantage of a girl when she down huh? No problemo cuz I got something to cure those blues with! Just you watch it with those tickly fingers of yours buster!


It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2015-12-11 10:24 PM


TF,
Bless your heart beautiful ~L

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2015-12-12 09:16 AM


And I am sure you could  very well mend that broken heart, Ticklefingers.

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2015-12-12 12:47 PM


Wow, really nice visuals,
there is a quiet comfort to your words.  

DaysofView
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Just A Slice Of The Pie
5 posted 2015-12-12 07:54 PM


You know I'm joking right?

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2015-12-12 08:45 PM


Interpretation is the beauty of poetry, an that's no joke.  Whatever!
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