Beyond the Clouds ('tweaked' version)

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Open Poetry #49

Beyond the Clouds ('tweaked' version)

secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2015-12-11 04:32 PM

        Beyond the Clouds

Dance beneath a crystalline sky
  of tremulous stars
as a grand night moon rides
the high-twilight wind across
a thousand miles of Winter
through these 'endless'
mountains of immortal Time.
Protect the purity of your search
for ‘truth’ and be as this silver
river flowing ever steadfastly
toward the glittering sea of
your finest dreams, with Love
as your one true compass.
Let your lithesome spirit-heart
roam beyond the clouds a lifetime
   long.

               --- b. e. adams (12/11/2015)

Ticklefingers
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Louisiana

1 posted 2015-12-11 06:34 PM

Wonderfully scribed SHDP.

Mellow, transcendental images throughout.

88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2015-12-12 05:07 AM

Thanks !

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

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By the Seaside

3 posted 2015-12-12 12:52 PM

be as this silver
river flowing ever steadfastly
toward the glittering sea

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I never tire if you passionate and ever peaceful poetry.
I seem to float upon the flow of your words.

Lovely work dreampoet.

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2015-12-12 05:54 PM

as always, thank you so much !

I hope at least sometimes that I give 'fine voice' to Gaia ...
but also that a philosophical message of worth surfs on top
of the cascading images of Nature. ...

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

5 posted 2015-12-13 04:52 PM

Gaia is pleased no doubt by your incredibly beautiful words and it is always a pleasure to plunge into your magical atmospheres.

Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2015-12-13 07:05 PM

as always, thank you, Margherita!

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