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Mr Martini
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Beneath The Line

0 posted 2015-12-11 02:19 AM


Morning comes and like always
I don’t know how it got here so soon
Prohibited in most of my old haunts
The wander-lust was far more my style
A darling of the Eurasian persuasion
She walked over every acre of me
With a pedometer metered like
A New York taxi at Christmastime

"The Tao of it all", she would say

The afterglow had all the brilliance
Of a Hollywood premiere
My baby blues turned to blue-dots
When she struck my core with her
Twin-floating carbon arcs
An epiphany came over me when
The shimmering stopped and she
Returned to my view with some change
.

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

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Pete_W
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Scotland (UK)
1 posted 2015-12-11 07:44 AM


Wow! Well written, read this through several times, full of images and thrills.
Thanks
Pete

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2015-12-11 08:59 AM


Kind Sir,

Getting walked on
Hand so deep in your pocket
Oh it hurts so good

Paying for some pain
Women will be it for free
But you get no change

Simpler to buy
A bruise or two on your back
Than a pain in the…
~L

Mr Martini
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Posts 366
Beneath The Line
3 posted 2015-12-14 02:52 AM


Thank you Pete_W for your attentive reading. Few will do as you and you are the better for it.

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

Mr Martini
Member
Posts 366
Beneath The Line
4 posted 2015-12-14 02:55 AM


Lori Rhoden, you're a treasure.


Merci beaucoup mon cher amie.

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

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