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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa 
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haunt i remember the touch of you and how it made me feel so protected and so cherished beautiful and complete the silent whisper of illusions drifted in unnoticed hiding in my misguided trust of the love you promised memories continue to haunt keeping me running from that light of happiness that shines so very far away -- Used to be rosepetals25  |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
If one is truly in the dark, the slightest sliver of light draws you toward it. Without that sliver, one needs to learn the language of the afflicted. Very thought provoking rosepetals. 88's friend She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
This is a very pretty poem rosepetal36! See I told you you could make a title and it is a good one because it made me want to read it! It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
Thank you both for the replies This one was much easier to name! -- Used to be rosepetals25 :) |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
And that haunt can hurt so.. Lovely write Poetess. rainy J |
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Pete_W Member Posts 185 Scotland (UK) |
That last stanza is so very full of memories and hurt, very well done. Thanks Pete |
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