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Open Poetry #49

My Curious Heart

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

0 posted 2015-12-08 02:01 PM

my curious heart
leads me down open roads
that wind easy along the way
...the way to your door

birds fly above me
singing a welcome
which echoes through the trees
softly tickling their leaves

gentle winds brush upon my back
whispering tales of forgotten lore
asking for a kind remembrance
of days spent with you

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2015-12-08 03:11 PM

That is so sweet! Great imagery too. I like it! ~L

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

2 posted 2015-12-08 03:43 PM

Thanks so much Miss Lori!

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

3 posted 2015-12-08 03:53 PM

Ticklefingers - Your fingers were definitely tickling the poetic visuals keys with this one and I heard the music. Very much enjoyed. Namyh

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

4 posted 2015-12-08 04:58 PM

Thanks Namyh!

88's

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

rainyday
Member
Posts 304
Heartland USA

5 posted 2015-12-10 11:26 PM

Melancholy magic here Tf.

Enjoyed..
rainyday J

Mr Martini
Member
Posts 366
Beneath The Line

6 posted 2015-12-11 01:49 AM

Well composed. Warm and complete in its emotional flow.

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

Pete_W
Member
Posts 185
Scotland (UK)

7 posted 2015-12-11 08:03 AM

A lane-full of memories here, well done.
Pete

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2015-12-19 09:22 PM

nice to read...james

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

9 posted 2015-12-19 09:47 PM

Thanks again to all!

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

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